Destruction

[olken]

Character: Drey
Faction: Sin
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Element: Fire
Summon:

Type: wolf
Name Maim
Personality: quick to anger,unfrendily,prefers rotten meat to fresh.

Power:

Absorb fire to add to the strength of his own.

Weapon:

Sharpend fire guantlet

Appearance:

Height: 5'11
Weight:192 lbs
Skin color: Pale
Clothing: wears a cloth undershirt, a red tunic, leather pants/shoes, carries a necklace made of rubies around neck.
Markings: has a scar across the middle of his face.

History:

After being a wanderer for most of his life, Drey always wanted to settle down and earn an honest living, but really never had the chance, one day he came across a small outpost in the forest, and decided to see if he could stop to trade and refill his cantine.
Upon entering he knew he had made a grave mistake when he was surrounded by some of the people and was immeditely being held down and robbed for whatever he had. Naturaly being agressive, he fought back and their leader decided it would be best just to kill him.
They tied him to a small post outside of the town and after pournig hot oil on him, set him aflame. Only later did they realise that his misfourtune would be their undoing.

Behaviour:

He enjoys the company of other sins but only if they agree with his motives. (burn everything) Hates the virtue with a passion and will kill any travler who looks at him funny.

Other:

Do not feed after midnight.

Journal: Destruction

[Zee ♥]

Okay. While the power and behaviour sounds interesting, but apparently you haven't been reading some Rules and other important Information from the Getting Started board.

1) No wolf summons.. I think that should be made clear enough? Wolves are under Taint, and not deers either, those are under Purity. You can choose some other untaken canine summons though, there're plenty like Jackals and other sorts of dogs. Just check to make sure you don't take the same summon as someone else.

2) Its cool that you could find a nickname for your Sin character, but you can put there in a bracket next to your character's actual name, Destruction. I know you've placed it as the title, but yeah.

3) Do elaborate on your points. Like your weapons and power. Give them some weakness, some advantage points. Describe how they're used, how it looks like, stuff like that. How Destruction mastered it, or has yet to discover something, etc etc. It'll make for a great read for other members.



Other than that, enjoy your stay in tSD!