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Post by Seya. on Apr 26, 2009 10:22:58 GMT -5
I S L E S - O F - K H A M ' H U R Plot: - Everyone is well and settled on Invydi, though anxiety will never end.
- Locals treat everyone like deities, tending to all needs and providing workers for the retreat.
- The sins have been finding themselves drawn to Magei and the strange Khamman Shard.
- They're beginning to forget important things, like about Taint, and why they came from Desarith.
If you have anything concerning this plotline to add, or want to make any suggestions, feel free to post.
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Post by Zee ♥ on Apr 27, 2009 3:25:19 GMT -5
Mm. I do have one thing, but I'm not sure if you'll agree.
1) I don't think Gea would forget about Taint xD; But thats not exactly the point in why I'm posting. 2) I think there would be a market on the island. Something like that. Else it would be a little hard to get by. 3) Following the above point, probably there would be some sort of secret ship going to Desarith, which is how Avarice is probably gonna get onto Kham'hur (cause then, the only other alternative is swimming. And thats a rather funny thing, cause you see, its pretty farrrr X,D). 4) Because of Avarice and Rapacity being able to communicate with only each other, they could probably carry messages, though not huge ones.
Lemme know what you think, cause if you don't agree I'll have to change a few things in Rapacity's profile :x
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Post by Seya. on Apr 29, 2009 20:01:32 GMT -5
Yeah, I`d say there`d be a boat across every equinox and solstice. So once a season. It`s presumed that you guys got across on the Spring Equinox sailing 3 years ago. Aaaand there is a market. As for the carrying of messages, I was hoping that no actual words could get across- could it maybe be changed to something like they can show each other memories, or pictures in their minds? That makes it so there's less of an actual communication until the shards start working. I don't even know what I'm doing with THOSE.
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Post by Zee ♥ on Apr 30, 2009 4:16:41 GMT -5
Egads, the shards. I suppose they're like, part of the island? Like, actually, the islands are alive, and require some sort of energy to produce better fruits and whatnot. Before the Sins arrive, they draw energy from the villagers. So when the Sins arrive, the island's shards immediately draw energy from the bigger source, which would be Gea's group.
And because of this, maybe the island thrives better than ever, and thats why the villagers worship the Sins XD What a random idea.
As for the communication, yeah, I think memories, emotion and images are enough. Words are hard to get across.
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